Comments of chapter undefined of The Geared Immortal

I know I'm nagging but, this chapter seriously needs editing. The girl'd circumstances are very crudely explained. And even if a character is a mob character, you gotta give it some depth. The martial brothers of the girl are clearly 1D characters, they only have one attribute- bad/evil. This doesn't happen in real life. Maybe they'd have had some conflicting emotions, or disdain, etc.

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Why is it writen in present tense??? its so weird to read a story writen this way

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Another cliche moment. I'm getting sick of this things

I think that was not suddenly but almost right?

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hahahha..your peeping..

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