Comments of chapter undefined of The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

Warning to readers. This is a very dark story. If your looking for fun and carefree power growth story, look elsewhere. Mc is thrown into sad situation after sad and cruel situation. There is defenatly parts with friendship, love, and family, but they cant overcome the tragedys that keep happening to Mc. I leave this warning for those who are sensitive to dark stories like me and so people will know what they're getting into. Otherwise if you don't mind this kind of story, your lucky because this is a brilliantly conceived and exicuted piece, just very dark.

Anna has that common name of a person that always dies. I predict all their deaths

Why the he'll I am the only one who thinks Mc mother just give him a speech about his future

I just started reading your story. I don't know if you have heard of castlevania. It's a interesting vampire hunter game and story. I recommend looking into it for any vampire related inspiration.

we all know they finna die.

oh god I already know what's going to happen due to my addiction to vampire mythology, and I'm already cringing.

Jelim, where can i find Ur book?

Jan 9 2021 Idk why but it plays like a webtoon in my head. pretty good so far [img=recommend]

Im re reading this, This is by far My favorite story ever and my favorite mc

Wow! a huge block of text. Can you, dear author split it up in a few pieces, please?

Thanks for the chapter

I like this startup

"Rassa was one of the draws this group of children, Falla was the other" what does this phrase mean? If you meant that rassa is one of the ones that draws attention, is badly worded, it makes no sense. pls, fix

Thanks for the chap! Pretty good so far!

Read the first chapter, it's nicely done. I'm expecting more from this novel after chapter 1.

Thanks for the chapter.

𝕿𝖍𝖆𝖓𝖐 𝖞𝖔𝖚 4 𝖙𝖍𝖊 𝖈𝖍𝖆𝖕.

Thx for the chap

Really good first chapter, no idea how these kids are gonna catch a rabbit giving it a 30 second head start