HuskyWarrior
I felt it was a bit boring, and Guy was too dumbed down. You do know that Guy is a well seasoned Jonin, and they need a certain level of smarts to be promoted to Jonin. I get that Guy is not the smartest crayon in the box, but he was not that stupid, especially with the wish, he would have thought about it, and as a Ninja, do you think he would have taken what the God said as the truth? The God just lied to him moments earlier. Other then that, first chapter was decent, you could also work on grammatical errors