Hey it was good to see that description.of the guy. It was really simple and neat.
Now if you added about their thoughts of each other in the chapter it will spice things...
Otherwise the flow is pretty good... Loved the fact that the girl is a baker... Yum yum foods for that guy...
Who noticed that every single time she separates from her boyfriend to meet her bestie, the bestie suddenly becomes busy and the boyfriend unresponsive đ¤am I right or Iâm thinking too much