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Some grammatical mistakes. But overall flow of the chapter was good. If the description of the guy was more detailed as in the back and his coating style, his back head and all; then it would have been more intriguing... But surely it's a very nice piece for a 1st chapter... Looking forward to the next ❤️❤️❤️
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