We can move past the grammar, as long as story is good and it is. I have now offi read this story officially 25 times. No wear bored with it, I have read Dangerous 3 times and the Bilioonaire. One 4 times, readin Falling Gray also, all are good.
Many complained about the grammer. English is not my first language, even i have found some error, i still can understand the story and enjoy reading this. But i hardly found it because of my poor English. đ
Good for you, Gabby. Who asked you to throw her on the bed? You think you're the only one who knows how to tease? Hahaha! I like your fiancee Gabby, so be careful with your wildcat!
If the reader knows it's a wrong grammar it can be fixed by itself..important is the reader UNDERSTAND what the novel he is reading.A good story is a good story after all..and this story is quite a good one.