TheIllusionist
I am not a picky reader and I rarely to never pick on someone's grammar but hun this is serious. The story is good. Only if you had a proof reader and an editor for your novel. It's so confusing that I skimmed through the chapter instead of reading it line by line.
Right. I saw in the forum here people were volunteering for being an editor. Maybe they can help? Anyway, I love your novel. Got me feeling so happy and excited 😁
TheIllusionist:Yes... I know. It's hard to find an editor. But thank you for reading. 😊