Comments of chapter undefined of Arranged Marriage: To Hear Your Voice

It's confusing,i still have to go back reading just to understand...but i like it, i am enjoying...try to review to check before posting pls...tnx

A bit confusing need to evaluate and some grammar as well. Sorry to say it... 👌👌👌

Use of names in dialogues are confusing. However, the story is nice and interesting.

I can help you proof read for free as your story line is amazing but fails to put forward your thoughts to the reader in one go...

you have my interest, but is is a little on the confusing side. a little to much jumping around between areas.

It's confusing specially on the supposed to be action part..

Interesting story dear author 👍👍👍👍😍

I am already in love with her character she can ride bikes, shoot direct to the skull,kick asses🔥🔥🔥🔥 she is a badass female character just how I like .. ❤️❤️❤️

it's a beautiful story I like it🥰

i ONLY have one "quest" lol can she still speak? 😉 the story is very interesting tho'

she is a badas!!!!

This story is interesting ...

👍🏻👍🏻

wow, my instincts are correct. i knew that Sabrina owns the bar since she's wealthy and mysterious and based from the previous chapters that she's drunk in NYC.

Interesting story. But the paragraphs aren't properly divided, especially on the lines on who's supposed to be saying the line and who's reacting to it. Anyway, keep working hard on your story author. Aja!

Too confusing

M finding it difficult to understand some things in this novel