Comments of chapter undefined of RWBY: Path of Blood

Everything feels rushed and it seems like the author wants the main character to do too many things which may or may not conflict with his already established character. This makes the dialogue seem jumbled and random. The MC says that he wants what's best for Neo, but constantly does stuff that would hurt her, for example, flirt with other girls in her face. It feels weird and uncomfortable to watch as seems unnatural and somewhat annoying as well as confusing.