MadReader
Wow, just wow. Is it just me or is this super ai super stupid? I mean, couldn't he have just made the all into beautiful female androids/robots? He's not even capable of being physically tired, why is he being lazy. Cause it's a boring work? Why not just give them the same face and body just different hair colour or something. And then he complains that they are slow? Isn't he the one who gave them AI with average processing power? He probably just did that to scratch his freaking ego. I already don't like the MC, a freaking egotistical piece of tin can.
This is going stupid fast... AI don't need to talk, it's a too slow and inefficient way to communicate. Also, wtf would an AI have a beauty bias? Especially if it was the cause of the ugliness? And said uglyness is only skin deep, i doubt the terminator cares about its fleshy envelopes' looks, so why should an AI even more advanced than Skynet would?
What I don't get is the online money ordeal. They're literally just numbers online - it's not physical money, so there's no need to steal. He could have literally just added numbers to his bank account which can then represent money, but is not actual money until there's a withdrawal. There's no need to 'steal' code.
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