Alaheeza
After reading this story for long now, I'm really inclined to say this. Author, you have a unique way of storytelling that doesn't drag like most Authors here on Webnovel. Your story is constantly evolving, and that's good. But I noticed you always used the word *Glared* even when someone is looking lovingly at a thing. You might like to look that word up with a dictionary because it comes off hatefully as compared to the word *Gaze* Glared is often used to depict when someone looks at something with dislike or a bit of an anger. So please try changing the word to Gaze when you want to express the look that one of your characters gives to something he/she loves or appreciates pls. Just thought I should point that out.