Comments of chapter undefined of Doomsday Pillars

Thank you GodGOAT for helping to edits hopefully its much better now..

Dude author, I don't know It's a coincidence? Today date is 20.2.2020 and a virus outbreak is happening in china! You are literally freaking me out dude! T-T

Oh god, somebody needs to edit this. English is not my native language, but even I can see so many errors in just the first paragraph, its painful.

ok so this is me reading in 2021🤣

Oh a father was given a second change how nice, does the evolution people go through let them live longer?

Is it just a Deus Ex Machina or he returning to the past will have an explanation?

Nice chapter

Excuse me but ‘wives’?

if i knew the dead were coming back i think i would start burning corpses rather they are recently dead people or not. then again doing that would probably risk you going to jail but at least there might be fewer dead coming back.

I really liked it , I don't know how although it's your first time writing it's really great. I l am also new here and so don't know many things . " Flighters" is my first novel that I started writing 2 days ago. I hope you will see it and will help me to review it ,so that I can also write better like you .😄😄😄

Thx

Nice chapter

Nice

nice

xxx

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Im Joker, On 8:51 pm, 22nd of April, I'm reading this ****. I'm currently experiencing quarantine lockdown due to 2019 corona virus.. If by some joke of Gods that I turn into a zombie, run for your life, im coming 😁😁

Guys we got him! The author is the culprit to Home-office, social distancing and the horrendously high prices for graphic cards... The true origin of Sars-Cov 2 or better known as Covid-19!

Porra o cara viu o futuro...{coronavirus}

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop