Comments of chapter undefined of The Empathetic Assassin
The Empathetic Assassin
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In this chapter the assassin asks the boy what happened and where the bloody incident took place. I'm sorry if the dialogue didn't make that clear. It helps me to read back when reading stories and make sure I haven't missed anything important, if you'd like you could give that a try! Thank you for your question, have a nice day!
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