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Comments of chapter undefined of God succession system

Paolo_Castro
Paolo_CastroLv4Paolo_Castro

"the warrior of liberation from another world has come to liberate the world" hahahahaha that would be nice entrance

Go_F_yourself
Go_F_yourselfLv1Go_F_yourself

Why do you always give us a cliffhanger, it's getting annoying and you update like too long for the chapter, that's just sucks man.

GrizzlySloth
GrizzlySlothLv4GrizzlySloth

Thanks for the chapter as always. A quick note, I have noticed a significant drop writing quality such as redundancies in how you describe characters and their interactions. Another point is the constant cliffhangers, which as a reader can be annoying. Hope you take these points into consideration as there is room for growth and improvement. Thank you.

Liioo
LiiooLv4Liioo

unnecessary drama just to leave it in a cliffhanger. the wait was for nothing 😑

TAKION
TAKIONLv3TAKION

The End of the chapter

slain
slainLv4slain

LeonToralla
LeonTorallaLv14LeonToralla

Thanks you for another new chapter more [img=gift][img=Unalived]

IsacNectulius
IsacNectuliusLv7IsacNectulius

Thx for the chapter

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4PUERKO_Senpai

Alex: Good afternood, ladies and gentlemen~~~~~

Boning_Daddy_8254
Boning_Daddy_8254Lv3Boning_Daddy_8254

Zeru_94
Zeru_94Lv4Zeru_94

thank you for chapterp.s. if chapter mostly fill with already know plot add more of ur own twist

white_spaghetti
white_spaghettiLv4white_spaghetti

Thanks for the chapter

Helios_Sol
Helios_SolLv5Helios_Sol

your trash author like really trash why can't you keep a actual schedule and be consistent also you novel has started to be going all over the place

RogueCrescent
RogueCrescentLv14RogueCrescent

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CoffeeAficionado
CoffeeAficionadoLv4CoffeeAficionado

Only change here would have been to wait for Luffy’s question and Robins response. We all know Alex was coming, but that scene still gives me chills. Luffy doesn’t give a -UCK who you are if you mess with his crew.

Anthony_Higgin
Anthony_HigginLv4Anthony_Higgin

Thanks for the chapter.

Lucifer_777
Lucifer_777Lv3Lucifer_777

Спасибо за главу

JURAZAZA
JURAZAZALv1JURAZAZA

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

phantom_
phantom_Lv4phantom_

thanks for the chapter