Legion20
I like the path the story is going on, but this teacher side of Lith makes me afraid as if the story is coming to an end, where the previous student, now master, says his goodbyes by moving on his legacy... I do hope it a baseless fear, since we can also see that the whole plot, the grand scheme (which is Lith becoming the Supreme Magus) is far from being spent in a few dozens of chapter. Common, Legion, at least 10.000 chapters!
Up until now, Liths young relatives have been somewhat irrelevant to the story. it makes me very happy to see them start to get fleshed out and become real mages, potentially with all sorts of future ahead of them in the world of magic. we could see them become like lith, or see them become optimal vessels for beings like dawn or night, or see them go off to school and come home well rounded mages going where ever their hearts desire. In any case, great few chapters and im looking forward to the next release.
I really really…. really really love where you are going Legion! You hit so many themes with that adventure class. I love how you portrait the childrens innocence and how Lith has to deal with himself to not make them like himself. Also it shows a side to Lith most of us probably are not used to: caring and actually showing it! It suits him so much - hope it lets some built up walls crumble. And for me as a reader it helps so much for the world building - going back to the everyday man - expaining magic from the beginning - seeing new landscapes Well done! If that intermezzo has been a product of a break - please take more! (you should look after yourself anyway)