Legion20
Baron Eiros is a great one xD For us, who have a real work..... xDDDDDD Lith made a good impression with dimensional magic, sometimes I forget that mages are few on Mogar
yeah it seems we jumped past the travel to the region and then to that place with his family.. but if I recall, when he was serving as a ranger he had to fly there the first time since no direct warp steps was there for such a small settlement.. so I imagine they warped as much as 5hey could up to the point they couldn't as they neared the place for a show of an archmage? maybe? I think we're asking too much of Legion here.. a small time lapse is fine.. it's not like Lith did battle with Dawn on his way there right? just in his way back, surely.. lol
OlivierA:Something doesn’t tie out though : how did the Verhrn arrive in Jambel in the first place, If not by Warp Step ?
when I started reading this story it was about a broken and lonely person in a world where even his own family cursed him. Now I am reading a story about a man facing the world with those who are dear to him by his side. I love the growth in the characters. Not just Lith but Solus, Orion, Phloria, Jirni and many more. I can't wait to see where you take us next Legion.
I love the change in atmosphere youve written into this novel these past couple of chapters. You gave us all a heart attack a little less than 10 chapters ago and so easily changed it into something up beat and heart warming. This story youve created has really opened up my world to reading and I can not thank you and TurtleMe (TBATE author) enough for what youve done for me. I will be reading your work years to come and am glad reading has become one of my joys in life