Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Magus

What happened to her was tragic but she a total piece of sh*t for putting innocent people into the same position she was in.

Inhumane actions of humans create human monsters.

I'm impressed by how unimpressive her story is.

This sob story would have had much more impact had it come earlier, I think it should go right after she kidnaps lith. By now, she has done so many terrible things to the characters we like that this has no purpose.

Sigh....I'm starting to doubt your villain crafting techniques author....isn't this just another Balkor ??? Every debt has a debtor....capture, torture, rape, violate desacrate the people who harmed you in the past and you have my total support, hell I might even help you do it (lol) but take your anger on a bunch of unrelated kids just to sate some inner madness is true evil... Please we want some true evil antagonist author, not broken people in search of flawed redemption....Aizen, Orochimaru, Leylin....sources of inspiration are all over the places

Did she have a ****ty life? Yes. Do i give a ****? No. Do i want her to suffer until her sense of self ceases to exist? Yes.

Nah, this no reason for such a deep and violent revenge plot. If there is nothing else then this was really bad..

After almost reaching the climax this chapter seemed almost unnecessary.. I could have done without it right in the heat of things unfortunately

honestly I thought it would be way worse,maybe Berserk increased my "tragic pasts" standards a little too much

I've liked and enjoyed the story so far, but Jesus ever since the plot line of Nalear's betrayl it's been getting so bad. I've hated almost every plot development thereafter. You're making me super invested into Lith's predicament and then you flash on over to other people's pov and it just gets worse. I've skipped reading through a bit of each chapter in this mini "ark" and I'm just venting how much I want to see Nalear ripped apart and move on. Don't get me wrong the writing isn't bad, just the plot line in my opinion. I feel like the rage from within Lith should have pushed the darkness within him. Once he was reunited with Solus he should have been able to wipe the floor with Nalear. But of course you needed to complicate the plot by making enslaved teachers join the battle. Maybe others can manage to read through this ark, but I'm thinking about just skipping till I find how Nalear gets defeated and however the vision gets solved.

Nalear be like: "i was almost r*ped and killed, let me fix the society by makin a bunch of innocent kids be r*ped and kilked too" She became what she hated and not even know.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Sigh I pity Nalear for her past. I don't need to remove The protagonist filter clouding my eyes to see that she had it rough from the start which essentially made her into this Malicious but cunning Villain that gave the academy and lith a run for their money. Just goes to show that humans adapt to their environment not only physically but mentally as well, Creating this vile Monster that only wants to sate her burning desire for revenge.

Tks Chapt

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I know what people felt like when you had to play as Abby for 10 hours in last of two now

I like the e development and complexity of Nalear as a villain, that actually make her a really good character. I still hate her guts though 😠

Thx