Legion20
Another short chapter. We are barely into the story but the chapters are already so short. It's so hard to wait all day only to be disappointed by the lack of story progression. Even after voting for it continuously because of its great plot, I beleive this is exactly the reason for its fall in rank.
"I'm sick and tired of humans hunting for cubs. The next time someone messes with my turf, I'll come looking for you." Then, it bit both of his arms off before Warping him back into their allegedly secret base. Alas, the mating season had come, turning the Lord of the forest into an angry murdering machine, having cubs of its own. " I love my Scorpy more and more đ„°đâ„ Last
I'm curious how spirit magic was detected but intrigued by what that entails as well as by what the king/ queen will do once they learn of Lith being a true mage... or at least being able to use an odd magic. Sorry, but I'm no longer concerned about Lith, he will survive as an MC, you've made him a bit too resilient for death. He is also not a good enough person I worry about him, he is a bastard despite being an MC.
Thanks for the chapter! This one kinda felt all over the place and almost as though someone else wrote it... Still good content, just the execution wasn't as great as usual. The first half kept jumping around and the subject was not always clear. Thanks for sharing this though it is one of my favorites!