Legion20
Lith is such a fucking jerk. He claims to be an ***** but ignore all the reasons as to why Orpal is mad at him making no effort to fix the situation. For someone that has already experienced what is like to live in a broken family, I hate that he doesn't put the effort to fix such relationship.
Rena doesnt feel a thing about lith. And he already adjust his ratio. Opral, on the other hand, starts with envious actions indicating his nature. Envy in its own is not a bad thing but to take away food from a baby ( his little brother ) means that the situation of the family is so bad and he doesnt have any love toward his little brother to begin with. From my POV, this can only be fixed by their parents. Some harsh punishments from Raaz can be replaced with some father-son talks and light punishments instead. But anyway what can we do?
also, Author. I get how MC, a reincarnated old man in the body of a child can have such deep thoughts, feelings, resentments. But a 6yo? and 8yo? dude. they are still developing mentally. Still have short attention spans, easily swayed emotions. So this, calculated resentment and animosity between the MC and his two brothers feels insane.
Lith is one of the worst cases a MC thinking they are some unfeeling sociopath when theyâre just a childish jerk, he doesnât want to deal with a dysfunctional family?Heâs literally the main reason the family is dysfunctional, you canât just **** on the floor and then say cleaning it is not your problem
Lith resenting Orpal is kind of annoying. Lith was a full grown ***** in his previous lifeâhis memories are intact. Orpal is a child. People will change a lot as they go through the different developmental stages, but it appears as if Lith has already written Orpal off. Lith is being an idiot. This is not a good look for Lith.
This mc has a serious problem in his head. He complains in his previous life that he's alone, yet he's the one who let his father die. He complains about dying of cancer but he's the one who chose to work on chemical plant for years. And complains on many more things that is utterly because of his poor life choices.
Something that I've always thought interesting in these other world stories, they always use the same base 10 number system. I know that it is because it makes it simpler to write, but in reality, there is no reason for an alien civilization to use the same base as us. For those that might not know, it is basically what the numbers count up to before restarting. 0-9 for base 10. 0 and 1 for base 2 (also what machine language uses,) 0-15 for base 16, and so on.