Comments of chapter undefined of The Super Sex System

good battle ahaha but I'm more interested in a bed battle heheh xD

I just wish he hide one of his elements instead of exposing himself completely. I understand he'll get more in the future but for now he still needs a hidden card in case of attack against him or his family

He need to get stronger fast now and strengthen his women also for them to Procter them self

Your imagery is pretty good. The only thing I think you could describe better is how the spells and their belonging elements respond to each other for the audience to better picture for how the explosion play out. saying something like "freezing gust stung my eyes as the blizzard was dispersed by emily's fire and lightning bolt." Besides that I enjoy your novel and the battles both in and out of the bed. The challenge on doing battle scenes is trying to keep the imagery that you have in your head without going into too much detail, while still creating things that are easily imagined and that a reader can really grasp. Thank you for the story. Keep writing and improving!

I think it’s the best battle so far keep it up

Need mass release

More chapters plz

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks.

Great battle I said want to smile on my face

Good he revealed all four elements

He shouldn't have revealed all the elements he used.

Thanks

Lightning element when?

Great battle

It’s good that he revealed his 4 elements because now the principal might protect him now that he is the new number one student.

Hey

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

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