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Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

aqgnbj
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i think the mc got brainwashed...

Fiaran
FiaranLv14Fiaran

She seems to be the hot older sister of Sarah(Jim's girlfriend), that he met for the first in the Minerva realm, when Sarah was bitten by the Daffodil bees. He clearly did not know her then (not Rachel from Green Hills.) We were never told her name. Now, suddenly, she seems to have been merged with Rachel, the Super Elite he met in the Green Hills realm. She is the one who joined his team as shown very clearly when he met her at the S Super Guild, Silver Butterfly, the day she and Leo joined Michael's team with Sophia and Reina. She thought he seemed vaguely familiar to her, so he reminded her about about Green Hills. (Not the Minerva realm, which was more recent.) I say she's been merged because the author suddenly magically builds the "crush" back story where they supposedly spent time together (like she was on his team) and he was interested in her (which he wasn't) while claiming she is Sarah's sister. This all bullsh*t and really pisses me off. I can put up with all the usual carelessness of the author - wrong names, half sentences, wrong words, typos all over the place, paragraphs that make no sense without changing a couple keys words that were autocorrected badly, because the story moves along at a good pace, and the character development and dialog is adequate. But this? Merging two characters together, changing the back story that we read (and can go and re-read at any time!) into something else. Pulling a crush out nowhere. Is it laziness or burnout??

TerestrialOverlord
TerestrialOverlordLv14TerestrialOverlord

Yes the knights are really chold when you bad spelling keels the mud, and you gurl lives you to wank yourself to slip..

Romdez
RomdezLv6Romdez

This seems kinda sudden with how little information was give about here and their interactions. Would have felt more natural with Jill 🤷🏽‍♂️

vkg313
vkg313Lv6vkg313

I need a break from this story. The MC is just too dumb now and there is no reciprocation

Tjpeterson96
Tjpeterson96Lv15Tjpeterson96

Just went though all of chapters 275-280. Sarah's sister's name is NEVER said! -_- how were we supposed to know who she was? I assumed she was the Archer/teammate Rachel because she was the only one who's name was ever stated

knight_of_hell
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Is she the Rachel in her team or someone different? Please also mention chapter no.

Blaze_Nights
Blaze_NightsLv14Blaze_Nights

red flag red flags everywhere 🚩🚩🚩

Maria16252744
Maria16252744Lv4Maria16252744

thanks for the chapter

Shika21
Shika21Lv10Shika21

Xp

WanZ
WanZLv14WanZ

Xp

Arch827
Arch827Lv14Arch827

Finally Micheal catches a break

Akshay007
Akshay007Lv12Akshay007

Only one chapter today....🤨

NamK
NamKLv12NamK

Qidian sux

TheEversnow
TheEversnowLv14TheEversnow

Why am I already getting bad vibes from this relationship... =/ I hope I'm wrong though.. with the constant mentions of his childhood friend that got caught by a monster when he was young I thought she'd be the love interest.. and I'm still not completely sure who Rachel is.. isn't she the bow totem user he meets in his first realm? The super elite?

tyregz
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Check out my novel "Linkers journey" It's heavily inspired by this one and i need your opinions on what to do

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shadowcoop
shadowcoopLv15shadowcoop

1st xp great chapter