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Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

DarkSilver
DarkSilverLv14DarkSilver

Hyena are mostly scavenger irl x) Good fight though ;) I'm gonna imagine it was magic mutated hyena instead

BriteKnite
BriteKniteLv15BriteKnite

hyenas are actually the most killy animal in all of Africa

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BOGEYMAN
BOGEYMANLv5BOGEYMAN

I dont know if its just me or not but i think you can go a little faster cause the pace is kinda slow. From what i can understand there are more cultivation levels and it's just beginning.

LtBeefy
LtBeefyLv15LtBeefy

really? Laugh laugh? Cant just do something like hehe or haha.

Dao_Crusher
Dao_CrusherLv11Dao_Crusher

Idiot when something comes at u trying to eat u and u look hot girl next to u. Teenagers it's good to be young.

The_Old_One
The_Old_OneLv5The_Old_One

This chapter got me in my nerves. Anyway, MC says he isnt goint to do the same mistake and guess what? He makes it. Good chapter

Confusion
ConfusionLv13Confusion

Yeah 36 confirmed if sublevels included and thats just using the lvl 12 confirmed which is probably more like 20-30 max. The almost blacking out bit is similar to crying wolf... the more you hear it the less effective. Plus if the pain is everywhere(which would cause erratic muscle spasms) or your body acknowledges it as a process of gaining power your subconscious will largely ignore it or develop a liking of it. Similar to how it feels comfortable to have sore muscles, as they are a sign of development.

MonteDT
MonteDTLv15MonteDT

So the grammar errors have decreased thanks but there are still some major ones such as repeating the samething or words that sound the same but have completely different meanings as well as spelling, so keep it up and looking forward to the continued improvement😁👍🏾

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Akshay007
Akshay007Lv12Akshay007

Wolf got his tongue....😋

Xander913
Xander913Lv15Xander913

This chapter really makes the MC less likeable

Divergent
DivergentLv5Divergent

Honestly i enjoy the story, but because of the poor English its unreadable.

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Still waiting to how badly he will react to fighting humans, i hope it wont disappoint.

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

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ShiroiiNeko
ShiroiiNekoLv6ShiroiiNeko

thx

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The_Dyslexic_Won
The_Dyslexic_WonLv6The_Dyslexic_Won

Thank you for the chapter

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Asura101
Asura101Lv6Asura101

Thank you.

SacarothIsWriting
SacarothIsWritingLv3SacarothIsWriting

Who else heard Jacksepticeye's voice at the Laugh! parts?

nonflynhawaiian
nonflynhawaiianLv15nonflynhawaiian

exp

Tad_LaRue
Tad_LaRueLv15Tad_LaRue

I think it is funny how he gets distracted by a hot girl in the middle of a life and death battle. Just like any hormone filled **** boy would.

DaoistvJ5Dsc
DaoistvJ5DscLv1DaoistvJ5Dsc

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

AlayaShiki
AlayaShikiLv5AlayaShiki

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Melkyal
MelkyalLv14Melkyal

Well, I don't know if I'll continue from this point. The story is interesting enough for me to keep reading, however I don't know if its worth it to keep ignoring the broken English. I'm not a native english speaker either, so I can somewhat understand mistakes of using different words that have similar pronounciation. However, in this case, the mistakes are just because the author doesn't care. Omissions of the verb To Be, or "The", are too basic to be permitted. The author doesn't care about people complains, and I don't even think that he really has an editor, probably its an excuse. Heck, if he really has an editor, then he is the worst editor I've ever seen. I skimmed a little in the chapters ahead and the grammar problems remain the same after 800 chapters.