Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

642/5000 The author could change the way he portrays the pain or side effects of devil training, for as he broke several bones, this must have hurt a lot, but not to the point of fainting, but he was already in the third movement what would be the limit of it, and the only thing you add is that he grits his teeth and bears the pain, you're using that excuse many times and for the rhythm will use much more. change how you portray the pain of exercise as something that the body adapts, you can use that excuse to make the pain progressive, but slow than just saying that it hurts more and more, and it only surprises.

I like this novel but author make the battle make sense, how does he try to dodge and makes a wound on the bull but gets a wound on the back not the front Another thing couldn't the mc just target the legs to slow down the bull instead of all the meaningless battle with that he ends up harming himself I know you want to bring a mc that struggles from the bottom but this isn't the way

The grammar has improved but there are Hella lot spelling mistakes and sentence forming not good............

This novel is fine but I wish it had better pacing. Feels like there's long stretches of not much then a big situation happens and he suddenly gets the next stage of the devil exercise. It's jarring.

A mere beast that has no intelligence shouldnt be able to change its horns direction at the last millisecond and do a kamikaze attack. Thats hogwash

i find his confidence that no monster will come as absolute indiocy considered he was ambushed by a pebble snake while he was waiting for the bulls to come

Alright I have somehow managed to make it this far based on the premise alone but my suspension of disbelief on how injured this guy can get and still function as well as the huge spelling mistakes that make deciphering what is even happening on top of the completely missibg words occasionally and lack of depth to combat is starting to make it impossible to continue. I really think this could have been amazing but if it doesn't get better in a few chapters then i will have to stop reading. Of the author reads this, which is unlikely, i'd like to say keep it up and don't give up.

I agree with alot that is said but the author really need to work on his grammar and spelling mistakes. I hope in the next couple of chapters I don't have to continue to try to decipher every sentence

man I wouldn't post chapters without your editor then cause this one about broke me

a lot of bulls lately

Thanks..

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Thanks for the chapter

the fights feel sooooo dull..

I can’t take anymore. The letdown of it being just as bad with an editor as without. Bye!

Anyone else who just scrolled through this chapter?

Not having the editor goes back to the beginning that was so difficult to read. I agree with the other posts that some of the combat seems repetitive and lacks a lot of depth in how it is presented and how the thresholds of pain is described. I can't imagine how many people have voted up this story with as badly as it is written. I hope that it gets a lot better as it has quite a bit of promise .

There is no way that the hide of a rhino is harder/tougher than its bones. Hitting the neck just behind the skull would be way more effective. Aiming for the skull may work for a smaller beast, but not a rhino.