Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Yes, an editor, congrats! I can say for sure with your story having such a nice plot, add on to that some good crammed will boost your novel immensely. Thanks for the chapter

Kill the bird find less annoying monster

Good story, but very useless and annoying pet monster.

Ashlyn better evolve into a f*cking Phoenix with all the complaining and she does

I read a comment saying an editor will finally make their appearance at this chapter, so I pushed through. I haven't even gotten half way through the chapter and am so happy now. Thanks editor!

Like many others, the bird's personality is starting to ruin the story for me. Hopefully the author eased up on that later on.

So glad that an editor has finally shown up to save this book. The broken English was so bad.

Like seriously, replace the stupid annoying bird

Roast the bird, get a monster that can do something other than demand food to do basic tasks

I don't understand how MC can be so stupid to always give in to his sparrow

How his training suit wasted so soon? He buy it 2 chapter ago? It’s only 3 day I think?

Say great job to the editor. The story was already incredible, but I was dying from the language.

To The Editor, thank you so so much.

To The Editor, thank you so so much.

Man I hate this snobby ass bird like come the f*CK.on

Dear editor, thank you very much for making this story understandable and more of a pleasure to read :)

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Looking forward to regular release