Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Ok, the stupid bird is really annoying! Can he do something about her. She has to understand that he can't afford her luxury taste. He should be less passive with her. I hate spoiled kids the most.

Editor will start editing at about chapter 36 and the editing is much better. So, just hang in there a bit longer guys :-)

until 16th chapter I didn't know the gender of the MC pls correct your writing the story is fantastic but gramar mistakes make it so much worse

Thanks for the chapter

thanks

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

They're just so many I's

Now mc reaches or started his first adventure to becoming a master stage trainer as his first goal of his life to reach..

I crave more.

This is bad. So bad. Storyline has potential but grammar, too much filler details and everything else is so bad 😔😞

Fu*k me! This novel has too much details.🤯😖 I am tired. 😟

Reading this story makes my head hurt which sucks because it’s a good story the grammar is just terrible

Thanks for the chapter

Sorry. I hung in as long as I could but this is fucking terrible. Get a proof reader. Hell a basic spell check will pick up a LOT of this crap.

Thanks for the chapter!

Pássaro chato mano

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Sometimes (every chapter) i think the mc is retarded

Ashlyn needs discipline training