Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Hey bro just a ****** story suggestion.dont go on a classic boring route of villan boy,villan brother,villan father,......,villan ultimate ancestor added with a lot of face smacking.there are sh*t load of novels like that out there and your novel wont have a bright future if you follow the same path

Editor will start editing at about chapter 36 and the editing is much better. So, just hang in there a bit longer guys :-)

That SHIT AWESOME

For **** sake author can you pls for the love is god edit this early chapters. how can you manage to attract reader if you are too lazy to edit this **** its fucking unbearable if no one told me that it will get better at chapter 36 i would stop reading at chapter 2

Keep up the good work. This novel will turn into something big when it has more chapters

how many stages are i one realm?

Try to make the mc unique by building the story on basis of his decisiveness,cleverness and hardworking nature.

If you can get past the typos, the poor grammar and sentence structure, and the hanging sentences ( ones that end without warning) the story is interesting. However I am enjoying the comments more than the story. I would suggest getting an editor that speakes native English, either from England or North America. But that is just my two cents. Carry on author.

Why is the characters seems so similar to Chinese novels??

good chapter

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I hope i can skip this story to chapter 36 😔

thanks

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