Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Suggestion for the story, he could start looking at a second monster (maybe a monstet that can breathe underwater, so that he can fly (when he combines with ashlyn, and swim fast when he combined with his new monster). Also, maybe he could start making money as a adventurer (solo missions of course, best MC is solo MC)

because MC did not have cheat like ability or golden finger then he need a teacher with mysterious backgtound so at least his development will clear and self teaching is not reliable from my point of review :) great man always have great teacher in their past :)

Story suggestion: Seeing that the MC don’t have a golden finger or cheat. Then give him a mysterious master he runs into on a mission. The master ends up having a very large background, but not wanting to spoil his new promising student he does not reveal this fact to MC. Instead he uses this background to help the MC in the shadows. Like stopping a expert too high of a grade from attacking him so he only has to deal with at most people a few levels above him. Also finding a second partner. Maybe another weak mutated creature with a lot of potential. I like the idea of a turtle like creature. He already has attack ability with the sparrow. So the turtle will give him defense.

Editor will start editing at about chapter 36 and the editing is much better. So, just hang in there a bit longer guys :-)

I'm just going to say the author has never been in a fight. Several hours for one fight? Is this DB and are we counting yelling at the sky?

Since monster can come out have them do some sort of combat exercise too. Maybe also what they are doing while inside his body. Make human body become like monster and monster body become more humanoid little by little.

The staff gaze passed mc's soldier It was shoulder or THE REAL SOLDIER which makes a REAL MAN

Teacher/treasure/random inheritance/another op monster take a pick but this is not the main issue... This novel urgently needs an editor. Novel seems good but half the time i have to read the sentences again to understand what the heck is happening.

U could also make him smarter and more manipulative as he learns to survive in a cruel world. He could use his brains to find ways to make money. Using money, he could buy higher grade sword manuals, equipment, blood from ancient monsters to integrate with Ashlyn, etc.

Improve your grammar, atleast proof read

Hmmnn. I think battling for hours at early stage is ridiculous. I don't think they had enough stamina and patience for fighting that long, since it can be called battle of attrition.

Need more.

Keep up the good work

How about when he's trying to train his birds abilities he sees a contest for flying type monsters only where they do aerial battles and the trainer's only can direct them in hot air balloons. So he sees a poster for this contest and does one or two errands in preparation for the contest on order to gain strength. He performs well and catches the eye of some people which leads to any future opportunities

Thanks for the chapter

I like the story so far, but I have noticed many grammar mistakes that throw me off sometimes.

sweet complexity, keeping me interested. Now, that is an accomplishment. Great job.

For the love of all things holy in the light novel world - please finish your thoughts! And use the proper names or words! Not everything should be word count or typed out using a phone keypad - like what I'm doing. Most of my time reading the novel is just figuring out what is happening, instead of enjoying reading the novel.

woah

Didn’t he complete one set already?