I love the story but this extremely broken English hurts when trying to read in bulk. if possible please try to get a better translation.
Other then that I am loving the story
The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.
All I can imagine is some dweeb yelling at a bunch of rats as they try to kill him idk just cant take it seriously especially when he has the equivalent of a smart pigeon as his companion idk đ
His one and only sword move is slicing monsters in two. It's a bit one dimensional the way the author discripes the fight scenes.
I like the story so far. But it's difficult to read and understand sometimes.
Kinda wish he went more pyromancer with the silver fire than just useing it as an auxiliary skill to cover his sword especially after he made such a big deal about getting it