Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

Omg look for an editor!

Dude, please look for an editor...

His improvements in stats are oddly specific. I mean 1.1 times faster? I suggest to add a function on his holo-watch displaying his stat

Nice story but my head hurts

It's sooo haard to understand

since you have and editor please get them to come back over these chapters thy physically hurt to read sometimes

OMG!!! I even read Carrol City as Carrot city until the final mention... Please you need an editor

man like no hate but ur gonna put off new readers if u don't get an editor to re do this chapter especially since it was unbearable to read I love the concept but I'm begging

First

give him some stats

dude. I'm only reading because of your persistence and tenacity. Appreciate it highly

Grammar is getting better don't worry, I see this a lot with foreign writers to English and they usually improve to a suprising level after 20-30 chapters.

editor?

get an editor

trash

Translated by machines, hope humans take over soon

the sword strikes again! not very original that..

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