Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

So am I the only one that’s gonna mention that he wrote abortion instead of absorption Apparently we stopping mana babies from being born instead of absorbing mana

I have a question if someone with a high grade talent completes Those rounds of mana refinement does there talent also increase or is there like a cap that the exercise can only increase your talent up to a certain grade, or is it that there is no one who can pass a certain grade of talent?

How does he calculate interest so accurately?

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

An ivory eagle lets her sprout ebony feathers. Wut?

I am ignoring all the spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes he is doing..... Frustrating

For a supposedly manual engine it sure does a lot of stuff automatically.

I'll be honest, other than a very slight idea of the outlines of the story, I have no clue what's going on here. Hope the writing gets better soon, because currently, this is worse than machine translation.

looks like theres gonna be some thick plot armor.

I thought he is going to the city 'The name should not be mentioned' but he is checking the ticket🎟 for that lvl 5 city. strange.

Thanks for the chapter 👍

is this English ??!!!

dude get an editor. it's a nice read but the grammar really detracts the enjoyment

I can't believe that MC is normal. How the hell is he going to be overpowered or powerful character? 😞😓😩😰😰😰

Is he going to be a SIMP

Thanks

needs editing

Author: There's gonne be ACTION next chap Next Chap: Hooo boi look at this ACTIVE training!

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