Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Okay people, listen up. Firstly, the author's grammar may not be great, but at least they are trying, and it's not like you offered to edit it, Second, this is their story, NOT yours, so they can write it as they wish, And third, stop being so rude and offensive toward the author as they surprisingly haven't blown up at you yet and have been very fair toward you and your suggestions Constructive criticism is a good thing, but not when it's put in an offensive and rude way IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE FRICKIN STORY THEN STOP READING IT AND LEAVE

If you won’t hire an editor at least learn English. If your writing in English. Please! Or proofread your own work. Seriously, I like the story concept but it is mind numbing to read

I think it's cool where your story is going, do not give up on it

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit.

The story is awesome you are only missing some words here and there like the, a, simple stuff and youre also adding a few unnecessary words. When im reading i just add whatever is missing or rearrange a sentence mentally so i can understand it. The story is awesome and improving it is easily as long as you can amke the words flow. Writing tip You should try reading it out Loud so you can hear it.

maybe its been edited since the other comments, but i find it readable. Thanks for the chapter. Don't drop.

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I am afraid your missing the entire point, mr. Petty person, with no helpful comments whatsoever. I already have a career. Why would I change it to write a book when I don’t want to? Are you stupid? It’s great that the author is writing a story, and making money off of it. But the constant, and baseless “ooooh what a great story!!!” Without actually reading it in its entirety, and writing comments like yours, is frankly sad. Especially after as long as the author has been writing there’s more and more, not less, errors in the story, no vocabulary or grammar improvements at all.

Skims through another chapter so i dont need to read the large amout of errors Borrreeedddd So the humans cant do anything without the monsters right... and the monsters are super strong and somehow they magically come up with a system to tame/bond them and a magical metal doodad that can go inside you can upgrade talent... ugh a system would be so much better at this rate

I salute those people who were able to get past 40 chapters in one go, while I am only reading 2 chapters per day just to keep my brain away from severe damage.

First!

An edit is desperately needed! And no one can be emotion.

I would like to mention that if you ever decide to publish this story, you absolutely need to go back and edit everything. As this story gets harder to read, I find it less and less worth reading.

You really need a editor dude... Is really hard to read this

Ashlyn is making train noises "chu chu" 😂. Got to find the positives in the translations

I love the book but bro I hate how you guys write its almost like you want people to not want to read or listen to your work it's not hard to ask a friend that speaks English to help you

ok to all new readers if you want to help the editors with fixing the first few chaps make a list of what is wrong where is it wrong meaning what paragraph is wrong then put it in the chapter comments. there most likely be a re-write at some point and if they know where to look it will be faster for the editors to fix it. Instead of complaining of how bad things are.

crude translation an editor is required for refining of story

it's tedious to read such bad english

Jesus like a retared kid wrote this. dropped