Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Finally a mc that dosent relay on treasures or other people to help him. It it better stay that way because its been so long since I’ve read a novel with mc that is TRULY weak to strong. With weak being ordinary but then with hard work and effort becomes strong. I hate it when people make mcs relay on treasures and other people (yun che, sky poison pearl and ******* giving him all of techniques, Mc’s with systems, Demon and Gods, with mc having his past knowledge and such.)

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

My god the quality gets worse the further you progress, not better.

I tried so hard And got so far But in the end It doesn't even matter I've put my trust in you Pushed as far I can go... ... I really liked the story but the way is paved with too many grammar hardships. Those who continue, you are better humans than me. The author should praise your patience. Strength & Honor Author: Sharpening the axe won't delay the work. I peave you this reader plea Spare me Grammarless, great lord of all grammar mistakes and senseless sentences. Your humble servant pleads for mercy and appeals to your magnanimity. You are the one who reigns over the history of human script. Please light the way to this author and grant him to escape from this dark corner. Relieve your battered reader from the grammar pain and let him immerse in the story. Yours sincerely, A reader In memoriam. Thy path shall be free of grammar mistakes Chapter 1 - Chapter 7 Rest in Peace

ok noice

Thanks

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it’s not really dislike, it’s mOre dissapointment bordering on hatred, and that’s already explained in my previous comments, so why ask? Reason being, for your refference. author lied about getting an editor, and in the beginning asked for help, I gave constructive criticism, and so did many others, and it was just ignored. the author Refuses to go back and fix prior mistakes in the work author should take PRIDE in. And cannot even remember who thier own characters are. throughout the wHole story, The author is paranoid, and states it so literally hundreds of times in the Story about his secRets. Especially about his bird, then after going to the capital with his family, lets his bird “grow” and takes his little siSter for a fucking tide, in the open city, for millions of people to see. you catch my meaning here? Don’t ask stupid Questions.

Turbo charged engine is better....

I'm just gonna skip directly to Ch 36. I felt like reading a mtl version. At least it won't hurt my head while reading!!!

Wait it's an actual engine

Thx

TLDR: he made a legendary Pal sphere, without pals and a blueprint 👌

I'm struggling to understand this. I'm dropping the book. I would sincerely ask for the author to ask the editor to go through this book from the beginning and fix it.

what is all those mumbo jumbo? ate a marble to dissolve into a mold? MC doesn't make sense. how did got all those knowledge to do refinement machines? what time jump 3 months... more rubbish then completed?

Worst interpreted book I have ever read. Nonsense

nice

hey what's all this web stuff

Gracias - Thanks