Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration
Monster Integration
AnWan
Chapter comments139
The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.
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AnWan
You get 4 stars for the careful story building and character development. You get minus 3 stars for the awful grammar, mix of tenses, random upper case words, broken "she we all should", Moster, Crystel,... This is awful and completely prevents immersion and this happens every single paragraph. Don't get me wrong I like the story so far and this is the only reason I'm sticking with it, I hope to see the light at the end of the tunnel. But so many glaring mistakes show that you didn't even use an autocorrect let alone Word or Grammarly. The story is as important as how you deliver it. Currently the experience is just bad. This is the worst chapter in terms of English mistakes so far.
Even more info in this chapter and the grammar broke down and got worse the closer to the end, and we still dont know the goal of the MC other than there being a "super dangerous" city somewhere.. I wish you luck but im giving up here, this novel sounds promising but it aint anything for me. I recommend using "Grammarly", it is a good support program.
Some say it goes better after chapter 18, I'm too impatient too wait. I feel like reading such poor english makes me lose my ability to speak and write english. I love the story so far, so I'm trying my best to read but please dear author, fix the previous chapters. This is the first time a reader gets struggled by what he's reading.
