Comments of chapter undefined of The Harvester
The Harvester
AhraManyu
Chapter comments18
IMO your works have way too much care put into them, you arent someone like J.R.R. or the likes (no offence just trying to prove a point) as such you should give yourself a break, Life hunter seamed a bit random at the start but you got the hang of it as it went on and the end product was satisfying to read, Rakna's status is the most important but you can be more sparing with the usage of the system. Try to pass us the key information in a sentence instead of a status window, especialy for side characters, cuz keeping track of so many status window will drive you crazy and inevitabely burn you out. So keep at it, give yourself a break the book is panning out great and cheers to the future. I hope that the feedback is helpfull.
Thanks for the chapter. RAKNA BETTER ADOPT OR TAKE CARE IF THAT GIRL. Author you have introduced a young adorably cute character, and now you must take responsibility and have Rakna take care of her if anything happens to her mother though he may have to take care of her anyway since shes a rare mutation and I don't want to even think about what would happen to her if her presence became known to the outside world.
