Comments of chapter undefined of I Cant Miss !!!

It's good to have talent but he is cocky, arrogant af

Wtf is with the pride full prick attitude? And the wanting more wifes attitude? Both just seem discusting to me.. and the flow isent that good and take some breaks in your text.. its like you tryed to put alot in to this one page, and it ended up to much to soon, with a bad flow.. smooth it out a bit more slow the tempo down a bit.. and check the dudes personality because it sucks!!!..... If this keeps up then there are high change of me dropping it... So good luck

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The ones who are hating are those who are jealous of his op ability. Like for real, this is fiction. Why in the world are you hating on the guy. I bet y'all would do the same if you were him

too op

Je ne parle pas anglais

Not too bad of a story

Paragraphs would help this story immensely. Right now I feel like it is way too disjointed.

He is useless and relies to much on his shot

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

YEY