Kotario
all your efforts are appreciated other song we understand I have tried to write many times myself sometimes you got to write a bunch of things down and then just piece it together bit by bit that's what I found might work like you start rough drafting something you look at through and you go from there that's what I found out work sometimes maybe it doesn't work for you that's different
Brother I think you are doing a great job I also think you recognized that Draco and Eva would need a check to keep them from spiraling too far so while Shuangtian was added in I think in the long run it was a necessary addition to the story. And you found a much better way to bring that into the story than a lot of people would have. Keep up the great work
Ima be real sorry if this hurts but the past 100 or so chapters seem to have lost their flare compared to everything else. I started reading gw for the story, the myster that slowly unvales like the lineages and world council and how they deal with them. These problems made the novel intresting and fun to read as in hadn’t seen another novelist write something like this. Ngl the quality had dropped after shanguantian was introduced as as u said, she wasn’ meant to be in it at all also there are just too many charachters now it was best when it was a small group when we can see the dynamic between everyone, their diffrent personalities and how they conflicted. No we don’ get that anymore like 1 every 200 chapters which kinda all. Anyways thanks for making all of this this is prob my last comment so yeh. -Roco