Kotario
With the quality you are going with, I don't really mind paying to read! I just really pray that you won't be like the rest, pumping up fillers too much that I essentially pay for nothing. Im sure my fellow readers would understand this point. That would be greedy. A short and meaty story would be really good rather than long and full of pointless fillers. This would encourage more readers to read your future stories.
Although we did not read into extreme detail about the NTR, we understood what happened, so please don't use such a plotline again. As for harem, I don't want one, but if there is one, then just make them servants because any more will take to much time away from the plot to develop the relationship. I am looking forward to the character development of the main cast, especially Sublime Notion, and the Five Generals, we have nothing on their characters. I was waiting for some mention of Draco's character change. In my head, I was thinking "why is he being so happy to go lucky with this quest?" I am glad that it is partially resolved because it was irksome to read such an attitude of such a ruthless and cunning character. This is a common fallacy with reincarnation novels where the protagonist forgets all his previous experience and becomes a horny 13-year-old.
Dear author, i really appreciate your decision and my little self will stick with you and your wonderful story no matter what. The quality of GW is way above most of the storys on this and other other sites. I really anticipate the darker and crueler parts in GW, it can only be good when it is you writing it. (may i be be excused for my bad english, not my first language)