Kotario
Umm.. ok so, I really liked the plot and twist in this chapter, its amazing how you made it that way. My only problem with this is, you know, why the girl let the pengu prodigy to do it with her. I know she was threatened but cant you make it like she just betrayed him in some other way? Like hey you know kill the pengu guy? I dont know... anyway i still like the way the story is progressing (obviously except the ntr part). Can someone tell me if night and draco ever did "it"? At least that can make me feel a bit better lol
I don't understand how the hell Pangu united the rest of lineages when you mentioned the gods were split off based on power(which Pangu is arguably the weakest of the 3 high tier),and even on pure charisma he should be lacking(as you said that lucifer and amaterasu posses unparalled beauty).Heck the only reasonable explanation could be that Pangu promised to let the other gods(since there are 7 males) with Amaterasu which will not only make him a fag but would also be unrealistic since you described him as prideful alpha male.Plus with Amaterasu obsession it will be preatty realistic if she either suicided or gone ballistic.Let's not forget the fact that with Drago personality in first life is kinda of a wuxia mc,so I'm pretty sure he would have preffered death to humillation(a fact which Eva should have known).
this is so triggering I would have been fine with the fact if she did it to prevent a war or whatever but the fact you made her a yandere don't get me wrong I love you and raise but a true yandere would have killed herself or kill the local Lord guy and been in a 2 V 1 situation against the pangu faction
Wow, it's actually not a BS reason and is pretty understandable why she would have *** with pangu guy, but still lucifer beat Pangu though, so shouldn't lucifer s descendants be way stronger than Pangu's and lucifers descendants have amateratus (I can't remember that name) descendants as allies. Even if Pangu descendants have the backing with the other 7 gods, they are still really too weak to able to actually pose a threat to lucifer and amateratus descendants.
So author san it can be said that draco is so weak that fmc had to sell herself to save him itll be good if the mc realize this. Also what if the god that grab him is lucifer heheheh Id be honest for me its not justify enough but considering that she massacre peopple after learning that the mc died i can assume that she truly love her And also what if the fmc future version travel back to the timelin so its gonna be 2 fmc Ps mister author kindly like my comment so i know that you notice me