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Comments of chapter undefined of Guild Wars

DaoistyVuMEd
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Umm.. ok so, I really liked the plot and twist in this chapter, its amazing how you made it that way. My only problem with this is, you know, why the girl let the pengu prodigy to do it with her. I know she was threatened but cant you make it like she just betrayed him in some other way? Like hey you know kill the pengu guy? I dont know... anyway i still like the way the story is progressing (obviously except the ntr part). Can someone tell me if night and draco ever did "it"? At least that can make me feel a bit better lol

Phaze_MorningStar2
Phaze_MorningStar2Lv4Phaze_MorningStar2

they probably did it because it said that they were caught by the local lord guy while they were doing 'it' and he told he's family that Lucifer and

Shad
ShadLv6Shad

weird if lucifer and amaterasu is more powerful than pangu why didnt they kill him together. why did lucifer lineage follows pangu's wishes when they are weaker than them they could just kill thee pangu lineage with the help of amaterasu lineage and win since lucifer already defeated pangu?

Top_Comment
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Naaa I don't see the possible logic. Why would Lucifer bend the knee when it's 2v1. They crippled their mofo genius for god sakes. The pangu dude was legit free to kill him.

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KonoGabesDa
KonoGabesDaLv4KonoGabesDa

Damn, I was angry with her but right now they are Just so perfect for each other

MafiaRaw
MafiaRawLv6MafiaRaw

I don't understand how the hell Pangu united the rest of lineages when you mentioned the gods were split off based on power(which Pangu is arguably the weakest of the 3 high tier),and even on pure charisma he should be lacking(as you said that lucifer and amaterasu posses unparalled beauty).Heck the only reasonable explanation could be that Pangu promised to let the other gods(since there are 7 males) with Amaterasu which will not only make him a fag but would also be unrealistic since you described him as prideful alpha male.Plus with Amaterasu obsession it will be preatty realistic if she either suicided or gone ballistic.Let's not forget the fact that with Drago personality in first life is kinda of a wuxia mc,so I'm pretty sure he would have preffered death to humillation(a fact which Eva should have known).

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kinggaming
kinggamingLv15kinggaming

Tbh i acctually rlly love this explanation and am fine with reconciliation id even be fine with them getting back together but only because of this explanation

Nigga_Lzz
Nigga_LzzLv14Nigga_Lzz

this is so triggering I would have been fine with the fact if she did it to prevent a war or whatever but the fact you made her a yandere don't get me wrong I love you and raise but a true yandere would have killed herself or kill the local Lord guy and been in a 2 V 1 situation against the pangu faction

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EroCulture
EroCultureLv5EroCulture

I read darker things but damn Eva crazy and Author your doing amazing work putting a nice twist to gaming element! Idk why people hate this MC can make both their lives better? Going to keep reading your work

DarkReHab_9434
DarkReHab_9434Lv13DarkReHab_9434

yeah I really enjoyed that novel till now, but that lineage shit is unnecessary and the next chapter made me drop this work even though it started so good ,😟

lemonice
lemoniceLv11lemonice

both leads are psycho. fine with me 😁

GTParadox
GTParadoxLv4GTParadox

I've read LN,WN, Manga, etc.. and nowadays its 'really' hard to baffle me anymore. But this chapter, damn.. Congrats Author, you made me ask for a time out when that Yandere mode came. Draco's brain exploded? Great, mine too lol Well Played Author, WP

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iappo
iappoLv11iappo

Howdy

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Daoist_Rskay
Daoist_RskayLv14Daoist_Rskay

Author, I like it. Keep going. Ignore the entitled "dropped" noisemakers. Keep up the good worked. And to those being dropped. It's simple. Go write your own book. Call it "guild wars 2" and that's that.

Inplay
InplayLv5Inplay

Author-san tell me what you're smoking, because it looks really good, due to that bullslhit you wrote

XTREMEOof
XTREMEOofLv2XTREMEOof

Wow, it's actually not a BS reason and is pretty understandable why she would have *** with pangu guy, but still lucifer beat Pangu though, so shouldn't lucifer s descendants be way stronger than Pangu's and lucifers descendants have amateratus (I can't remember that name) descendants as allies. Even if Pangu descendants have the backing with the other 7 gods, they are still really too weak to able to actually pose a threat to lucifer and amateratus descendants.

Konrad_The_Fourth
Konrad_The_FourthLv4Konrad_The_Fourth

So she still make out with pangu?

Lonely_Prince
Lonely_PrinceLv4Lonely_Prince

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh author would have better avoid this dialogue "what's point if you are not alive so kill kill and kill" so why not kill the person who threatened him....... why?????? why?????

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loulou098
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So author san it can be said that draco is so weak that fmc had to sell herself to save him itll be good if the mc realize this. Also what if the god that grab him is lucifer heheheh Id be honest for me its not justify enough but considering that she massacre peopple after learning that the mc died i can assume that she truly love her And also what if the fmc future version travel back to the timelin so its gonna be 2 fmc Ps mister author kindly like my comment so i know that you notice me

Kmari_Toles
Kmari_TolesLv3Kmari_Toles

Welp I'm not angry anymore her reasoning is completely acceptable

Yatendouij
YatendouijLv4Yatendouij

kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk boa tentativa autor mas você só fez ela ser odiada ainda mais kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Qvoth
QvothLv3Qvoth

Ator fumou MT maconha pra escrever essa parte aí