Kotario
oof that really gave me a scare! I'm really sorry to do this, but i dont know how to contact you personally. Not sure if you are aware, but there is actually a game called Guild Wars (there is even guild wars 2). The company also published 3 story books related to the story in game. As such I think it might be dangerous to use this kind of name for this novel and if it is possible it would be really good if you could slightly change the name. Sorry again and i will definitely read it ^^
Decent start. With a good english and smooth reading experience you are already above average on Webnovel. If you want to be place top 10 of my novels here on this app, you just have to avoid following premises; The „do you know who I am?“ character. The shy and demure damsel in distress, who for some reason immediately falls in love with you. The overly hypocritical mc (exception: It hel** to further mature him). Now if you want to compete in my top 3 novels here, you really need clever antagonists (yes 1 to 2 are not enough for longer stories) and reduce the amount of small fries who are just there to gloat to us readers how strong the mc is. There is really no need for that.