Comments of chapter undefined of Fragments of Time [FREE/COMPLETED]

Wow***...author where do get such ideas from? I felt as if i forgot breath..goshhhh :0

I don't want David to die he at least deserves happiness with Elena and everyone else

We're getring so close!!! I'm jusr wondering whois that master which is above rick that allan have mentioned!!!

Author great job i like ur plotting very interesting

I'm hoping ,there are some Good spirits in the cave ,to help Elena and David. They have suffered so much already and Rick must pay to all sins that he comitted..His Soul must be burn in hell😠

Oh god...It's like I am getting out of breath...❣️❤️

To Elena and David..Your True Love is your Weapon..💖Be Strong

Can they get out of the cave alive?

Wow... this is getting really good and I can't wait for more...

The Master..☺

Thanks for the chapter

Great job author 💖❤❣️

The intrigue around the story makes reading worth every while

Yeah

Wow wow so much action. Would not wait for d nxt update.

This book gets more and more interesting and I cannot make any predictions at all.

U r soooooo Gooood!!!!!! Thank you!

A shout out of love to this book

This was so awesome. Thanks for the chapter, love you muah

Just great