KazzenlX
Hello author i am a new reader and i can see how much work u put to and i am aslo a writer but never wrote a story seriously so i just read for now but sooner or later i maybecome a writer so yaa i just admire your work and how much u work hard and all . You became my idol some how i just started reading 2 days before and i reached till here by now i am still too young although i dont know your age , even soo i just love your writing and the way u present things its sooo good .
I am a new reader of your novel just a few days ago and I must say that my interest was piqued by the title itself. Usually or a lot of novels that I am reading, once I saw the title, I read right away the synopsis if it is interesting or not for my taste but with your novel just seeing the title arouses already my curiousity that is why I added it right away when I stumble this novel a few days back. Anyway, the story is very interesting, exciting and unique. Just a little correction for the grammar if you don't mind dear author. For example for this chapter... "didn't you said".. it should be didn't you SAY.. didn't you came to didn't you COME. Since you already used DID which is past tense, the verb should be in present tense. That's all. But all in all, your novel has good wordings and thoughts. Thank you for writing this novel and for your hard work as well. ๐๐๐ I am shamelessly welcoming myself. Hehehehe
Another puzzle piece in place. Zaki and Fei did interact and that seems to be where he got his human emotions from. I got a little teary eyed with the last paragraph. Congratulations on your 3 month anniversary! โ*:.๏ฝก.o(โงโฝโฆ)o.๏ฝก.:*โ Zaki with his Cheshire grin is just too precious. Wonder if Sei found anything.