KazzenlX
Your character development is on point. The story progression is great! Not to fast, not to slow. I want to know more about the side characters (Davi's little bro, Zaki, YuJin) and how they are related/interact with Sei and Davi more. I want to have little bits of information about their past. I feel like Zaki is a vampire, but what does that make Sei? What does Sei do for a living? Hey, sometimes it's good to be treated as a princess! 😘 Especially when you are stone cold man. Hahahah!!