KazzenlX
for a newbie your 1 English command over thought flow is super. 2 your story line touches the heart..though common. 3 the way you spin the story, the feelings u write about- very real in the world out there 4 bottom line of we would do "anything for a loved one" is a motivating factor for millions around the world.. so your story is a fantasy based on reality👍❤️ Keep it up 🙂😉