Comments of chapter undefined of Training Pokemon

here again with the suggestions this is the last one, as most mistakes ive posted in previous chapters seem to be what youre having trouble with. `be sure to go back and put missing commas and apostrophes specially to separate dialogue from narration `be sure to check up how to properly use past and present tenses `that=signifies an object i.e that pen `than=used to compare i.e id rather eat than starve `then=used after something has happened i.e want to follow me? then come along `their - group of people i.e it is theirs `there - point at a place i.e its over there welp im off... just gonna go read and stuff...take my advice to improve k.... you have good potential for writing

Why author always ask someone to name his chap? Do he not see how small the number of viewer? And number of hater? Don't ask something that no one want to give author.

Bing you got a house name of the chapter thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter~!

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍