Comments of chapter undefined of Offer to the CEO
Offer to the CEO
klmorgan
Chapter comments26
Please author, are you trying to brain wash us with the same details? You know you can just write "Anna told her her story with Jinhu and how she met You, omitting blabla..." Two lines and we are done! rather than writing two paragraphs of something we read 100 times. Please author, while your story is interesting, it is time to move on and to not be so hung up in a minute by minute exposé. The main purpose of a book is not to repeat things, We - readers - have memories and if we don't remember, since this book is online we can easily go back to the previous chapter. You don't need to waste time in writing the same thing. I deliberately use "wasting time" as this is a waste of time for both you and us. Your book could have been so much better if it wasn't repetitive... We are at part 5 or so of the firing back and so far no firing back... What a shame, so disappointed! I have never asked an author to change the way they write, but you will be the first one I will kindly ask to change it, by this I mean - kindly edit your upcoming chapters to remove any repetitions and by that I mean the following: 1. Police assault transcription 2. Anna injuries details (I am sure she is gonna says it to her in-law, friends, press, etc.) 3. Their marriage certificate account 4. Their supposed meting stories 5. The abuse by Jinhu - except if it is a new one we don't know 6. The different draft press releases we have been fed with If anyone think about something I haven't mentioned, please feel free to add.
Hi everyone, I can understand you feel frustrated that things are being repeated. As the readers we know the story, but they are not isolated characters, and the story is heavily influenced by the legal system which requires people to repeatbtheir stories often multiple time (And I mirror this but trying not to use the same method each time to tell the story). In this case Amanda wants information. It is about the trust that they are developing in each other. Yes Anna and Hou Yi are telling the same story to everyone, which is only part true, but they are not varying from it, but she keeps it short (And your author knowing your frustration has limited what is being told to new people and if this was a novel where you had to pay SS a chapter such of this would be in the auxiliary volume due to that repititation so you would not be paying). However, this willingness to talk leads to help to set up Yang Lin, because Amanda sees Anna as someone who is trustworthy.
