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Comments of chapter undefined of The Devil's Sleeping Beauty

Kalita_Grant
Kalita_GrantLv14Kalita_Grant

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

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Hoshi07
Hoshi07Lv6Hoshi07

Don't drop this author this is a very interesting plot. You are able to concretely show us that both of them is just victims of the circumstances that they can't control. LY definitely won't do what he did if he is in his right mind, HE WAS DRUGGED AND HIS TRYING TO ATONE TO HIS MISTAKE. he was reborn again, he knows almost all about XM and he loves her so much that he can't control his emotions. as the story goes IT IS EVIDENT that his trying to do the right things. ALTHO I DO WANT HIM TO LET XM GO. I'm sorry LY it is definitely not your fault. You see your just hurting her and yourself by continuing this love story. Maybe you can have me instead 😉 Thankiess amazing author!!!!

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Krizzy
KrizzyLv13Krizzy

Ive been supporting your novel since i read it the first time.About the negative comments or reviews, just make them as your motivation to strive in writing further. Good luck!!!!

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Haxijiu
HaxijiuLv13Haxijiu

Dear author, I truly love your novel coz your novel is the first novel coz I never found a ML lead reincarnation in Romance novel. I also not supporting R*p* story, but you manage to change the story and make the ML regretting it.. your idea in this novel really fresh and new and I love to see more development between the ML and FL and Mello.. please give a hard time to ML and punish him a really hard before FL love her.. and please don't drop this novel just coz of the negative criticized you received.. I gonna support your novel just please don't give up and don't change the ML coz for me he might not the perfect man but he gonna repented all his sins coz he love the FL so much.. 💜

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nanacelia
nanaceliaLv15nanacelia

Please continue the novel i really enjoy it Thanks

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milestyle
milestyleLv15milestyle

I admire your courage on writing this novel. So never say that you have a limited knowledge. The mere fact that you started writing and making your mind work while continuing your studies is impressive enough. There maybe errors on some parts but for me its acceptable for most of the novels that I've read so far have errors as well. Remember: There is always a room for improvement and without mistakes and failures, you will never learn and grow. Keep it up! :)

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Mandylovelle
MandylovelleLv15Mandylovelle

Hmmm. The pace is just nice. To break things off with a childhood lover is hard. And to break the barrier between lyf and xmr is hard too. But I'm willing to see how u work things out. But I hope sincerely that the main couple will be together in the end. You write beautifully too. Your characters development is not bad too. Take every comments with a pinch of salt ya. Sending love to u 💕💕💕

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abhi24
abhi24Lv6abhi24

Dear author....plz don't drop this novel. I have been following this novel from the beginning.....as a reader I have seen some improvement in ur work..so don't make urself sad .... everything is going so good...so don't make some negative comments impact ur writing....you are a great writer....

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Cailla
CaillaLv5Cailla

Dear Author I like your novel because it's teach us to forgive and to have a second chance in our life so don't change it

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True2You
True2YouLv14True2You

Dear author, Grammatical errors are bound to happen, especially, when English is not your primary language. Even those who are proficient makes mistakes all the time. Though, it does irk me to see😂😂but I’m not perfect myself, every now and then, I find myself with simple errors as well. It’s human nature, we’re not perfect. If, you’re still looking, I can give it a try🤗🤗 I love proofreading other people’s work. With that said. Honestly, me, reading this novel. Did not give me the impression of her being rape, others opinions may differ from mine. Since, the ML, was not aware she was drugged as he had explained it to the FL, when she asked about what happened. She understood him. I can understand, if the ML, was the one who drugged her and new what his intentions where when he gave her the drug to drug her, but this situation, she was already drugged. The only mistake the ML did was to assume she was a whore, a prostitute, so he had his way with her. We cannot condemn someone when they are a victim of someone else’s malicious intent out of jealousy for the other party 🎉. The FL, understood this, that is why she was willing to forgive him and start a new. In the real world nothing is as innocent as we want it to be. However, what your novel brings out are situational situation one can be in when they are at a party, club, etc., be given a date rape drug, if they are not careful, anything is possible, worse is when it was the people you know who had drugged you. It also gives us prospectives on lowering or shields 🛡 and who we can trust when it is down, etc.. in the name of love ❤️ women even men can be abused by their respected partners, husbands, boyfriends, girlfriends, etc.. but how you get yourself out of those situations will be an obstacle only the victim knows. I would encourage you to stick with your storyline and plot, there’s bound to be some jealousy, hatred, etc., that’s human nature and part of every day life.. the difference is how you go about on resolving those issues.. ML and FL, are dealing with it by being open and honest with each other. Communication is the key, but than again human nature part of daily life, if you end up with a psycho, no matter how open the communication is, they will still be possessive and crazy bound, as a woman, if you see these kind of acts appearing, it’s best to end the relationship early.. there’s more but I will leave it at that. YES, Happy ending please..

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Taymetop
TaymetopLv5Taymetop

Please continue this novel and i really like the flow of it. Not everybody will write something good about it because such is life. Always know that more people who enjoyed your novel are reading it and can't wait for upcoming chapters. Thank you for taking your time to make us happy.

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Silya
SilyaLv4Silya

Your novel is good but please we want a good end

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Maddy4382
Maddy4382Lv10Maddy4382

No offence but your male charater seems cold and abusive. And your female character seems dumb and timid and a 2 timer

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AB244
AB244Lv10AB244

I will gladly be your editor

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ikki511
ikki511Lv5ikki511

is there like a crossover of your characters from your other stories?

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Gramcie2007
Gramcie2007Lv4Gramcie2007

@BerriApplepi, I love your fast-paced novel. If you are okay with it, I can edit your stories so as to give better quality for the readers. I am OCD in grammar but I don't let it get in the way of having a good read. If you are ok with it you may email me at gramcie@gmail.com. I offer my services for free ☺

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RoseNBoys
RoseNBoysLv11RoseNBoys

My dearest author keep up the good work. The story is good love how well you change the it's almost as you planned since the beginning of it. You definitely know what you are doing. Love the way you are releasing the chapters and communicating with us fans. You just have to not read negative and only positive response from your fans. So can't wait to buy the book I have say I love how you are making the experience better. My experience was not. It sure is helping me heal

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Poisonpink
PoisonpinkLv5Poisonpink

Although it started with SB plot r*pe and all....but you have managed to change its direction....i didn't really like reincarnation plot but thats not the issue anymore, what matters is when characters realize their mistakes and try to ammend them...Nobody is perfect and its more realistic and natural when relationship growa after bumpy roads...its Totally fine plz continue

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jhoangmuzic
jhoangmuzicLv4jhoangmuzic

Author is too humbleeeeee. This novel has become one of my most look-forward to stories everyday.

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Avikari
AvikariLv5Avikari

Dear Author I don't know why you are doubting yourself. I guess you are doing great work and we all are with you on that. We understand that you are studying so you have not much time, but I really want to thank you for writing this story. You should not think much about the anything and just keep the same pace of publishing the new chapters😋. Would love to read more🥰

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Books_bug
Books_bugLv6Books_bug

Thank you for the nice story...... 😊😊😊 Love the way you narrated the story. All characters are also wonderful specially little melon 🍈👶... LU Yifeng and Xia Meiren definitely best.... Though they are not in good terms right now but for sure you'll make them inseparable unique couple in future 💏💏👨‍👩‍👦 Love to read about the wild couple also... I mean LXY and Bingbing 😜they're lovely together..... Thank you so much once again 😊😊😊 you're work is very good, so don't stop it..... keep it up dear Author 👍👍👍👍👍