Okey it looks good so far. The grammer is good as well as the characters . Hope you to keep the pace like this. İt has a high possiblty which will make this book one of the most loved by readers.
Good job author 👍😊
Hmmm this novel is actually really promising.... The characters are really good and the plot is quite different....
I hope there is not too much misunderstandings between Nuan and Huan'an. I know there will be troubles and hurdles but i wish they handle it together.....
I hope LinChen will always be a good brother to LinNuan, protect her.
I know LinRan will make a move soon, judging by her grudged agaonst LinNuan parents, and LinNuan..