싱숑
"In fact, Jung Heewon's suggestion to drink was an attempt to lure Jung Heewon" The second Jung Heewon should be Dionysus. "A few words written in bubbles on the ground might not seem great, however it was extremely difficult for constellations to communicated with incarnations in Ways of Survival. " However should be replaced with but, and communicated should be communicate.
Yes! I knew he was going to come back up at some point! Just not how. He was just a high school student who didn't want to die either... I'm clearly back on the same wavelength as that "enemies to allies"-loving constellation - redemption arc maybe? Or more character interactions for Dokja to see even more that there is more to understanding this world and it's people than the novel gave him (which he already realises but I feel like he doesn't like the gaps in knowledge and wants to know about all of their tales). Or maybe Kim Namwoon will choose to remain twisted and that will still new development too? I definitely prefer it when they don't remain with regrets though...