Comments of chapter undefined of The Forgotten Princess
The Forgotten Princess
Les01
Chapter comments70
Mood swing 😂 Might I say you dont have to explain the past in every chapter. Once you mention something (for example the reason Alicia was unable to see the beach) in a chapter, it's already set as the story line and does not have to be repeated. This gives you space to develop more action or dialogue between the characters and allows more fluid reading. I have read all 323 chapters in a week and a half 😂.. I totally love this story, and I cant wait to see more. ❤
I have read all 323 chp I am really loving the story line. I love that they always come together instand of being apart the whole story till the end I dont like those. it gives excitement and tense moment but he always gets her without fighting and losing her over and over till the end. I am excited to see how the baby turns out and would like to see more than one child with them working together for the good maybe even mixing with some the other creatures. But however it turns out it has been a very good read I love it.
