Comments of chapter undefined of The Forgotten Princess
The Forgotten Princess
Les01
Chapter comments34
as I have reached the port of Valencia I have run out of coins this is what I think since I am paying for the book out of my pocket I dont like that the last 3 paragraphs are repeated as the first 3 paragraph of the next chapter that's ridiculous I also dont like that u put that piracy thing in every chapter that's ridiculous also ok maybe every 5 chapters should have the piracy thing but the reputation is not necessarily important for the story I do love the story it has huge elemental twist and turns and is very clever but u also tell the same events in two or 3 different POV which is also unnecessary but unique but not at my expense I think after I paid my coins for that chapter all POV should be in it before I start and pay for a new chapter should be a different event not the same event told from a different pov then paid multiple times for one event see what I am saying
I understand this is thier first quarrel and she feels really bad for keeping such a huge need from him, so the remodel and regret is what's taking it's toll on her body couple with being in the early stage of being pregnant. Am happy they resolved thier issues and he gave in and said he forgives her. Thier Love is one of a kind👌🥰💕
